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Monday 25 September 2017

Write a persuasive text (energy)-Anaiyah

Hi my name is Anaiyah and today we will be learning about a persuasive text there are the examples that might be right.


Dear Mr Wood,

          To try and protect New Zealand and be a more sustainable country

Hi my name is Anaiyah. Dear Mr Wood,
and i am 8 years old i would like to make this formal complaint please let me say , this does not result in the annihilation of ecosystems, as witnessed in the extraction of fossil fuels. For instance, in the river Niger Delta, an ongoing irresponsible and excessive oil extraction can be witnessed. As a result of this activity, the mass extinction of fish has been observed in the region, as well as the abandonment of whole villages where people used to live on fishing (Nelson, 2008, p. 63). Another well-known incident is the BP oil leak in the Gulf of Mexico, which spilled over a million cubic meters of crude oil. Using solar energy does not imply real the atmosphere; the energy production process for it is free from any gas,

1 comment:

  1. Hi Anaiyah, I'm Miro from Awahono School. I like your card to Mr. Wood because, I agree with you, we should take more care of our planet and be careful with things like oil. Maybe you could say how we could start to do that, for the people who don't know how.

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